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    Ok, must watch best fucking movie i've ever seen...new style of text...=/...testing :
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    Original:

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    Text..i hardly saw it, add a small, very small outer glow, so it will be noticeable.
    Sig looks a bit empty :/
    The yellow thing doesnt suit, cuz the sig itself is more a dark style.
    Try to blend it a lil better.

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    i hate how the effects r only on 1 side
    id like it more if u added them on both sides of render
    and yea the text u cnt c :O
    seems a bit plain but if you added to both sides that could be fixed
    well good job anyways

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    Try to add a light source. Also as flash said try to even out your c4d's and clipping masks. I like the text tho. And i noticed it.
    dead account sorry lads

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    I like the clipping masks, but they seem just a bit too...straight (for lack of a better word).
    Make them flow in a direction.
    Also, the brushing behind his shoulder just looks out of place...it distracts from the focal point.

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    its good, but text is bad.

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    am i blind? i dont see any text at all... oh just saw it.. yeah no text.
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    yeh, i aint got any good C4D's light effects or fractal renders, i agree the Light effect is out of place, the text needs to either be moved or i should mess around with the blending...all i need is a good C4D pack...

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    If you ever have to look for text for a couple minutes (like myself) then there's definately something wrong.
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    yeh, i must've been looking at my laptop at a funny angle which changed the lighting for the text which made me see it...
    i don't see it very well, but the text is nice for simplicity stuff, but im no good at that shit, ima have another go after school.

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    No text is better
    try to make it less one sided
    clippoing mask splat looks out of place
    because it is one sided the sig looks very bland
    a little more blending of the main guy would go a long way
    with the blurring u could make the guys towards the front slightly more focused and the ones to wards the back less forcus to give it more realistic depth


    Shifty sexy shit


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