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    Well I posted here before and I pretty much just got made fun of (which might happen again), so I left and gave up on graphics but I have spring break and decided maybe I should try some stuff so I did I spent some time and made this

    What do you think? How can I make this better what should I try doing, I wanna get better.. The one in my sig is the one I posted a little whiles back..
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    dont touch the wind or text tool


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    I really don't see what you did there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by R3V View Post
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    f-f-f-f-fail

    other then the text being too big and distracting and the render too winded... this is okay..

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

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    u could read some tuts to make it better.

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    Yea the wind was a gamble won't make the mistake next time, and you guys are right the text IS too big.. But it just felt empty with small font..Better or worse if I brightened it, like a stronger red in the background?
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    It's not too bad. To be honest, mpgh will always have people who give very negative comments, just ignore that, if you think it's good, then you're doing something right.

    As for the signature, the text blends in with the white in the background, i love cursive text, but it's just too distracting. And as for the render the left eye (his right eye) looks alittle weird. Not sure, but all and all its not bad 6.5/10 keep it up!

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    Better than what Irish made, I'll give him that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by imran446 View Post
    Yea the wind was a gamble won't make the mistake next time, and you guys are right the text IS too big.. But it just felt empty with small font..Better or worse if I brightened it, like a stronger red in the background?

    It feels empty because you did... god knows what, with that background.

    Perhaps try something simpler to start, such as shapes.

    Some of the best signatures i have ever seen were made with simple polygons.

    My suggestion is to start with less, and then later you can add more. Although by that time you should have realised you don't need much. Don't use my signatures as examples although technically they are simple, they are also very busy...



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    1. That wind looks like shit.
    2. His eye with light on it? Too much difference in lightinng, cause the way I see it, the white in the background would say that there's the light source behind, which means.... You guessed it. There should be no light on his face.
    3. Text = No. Just no. Too distracting.
    4. Pixely? OMGWTFBBQ!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?

    I could go on, but I'm not gonna spend the day saying what could have been done and what was done bad. But like was said, read tuts and basically, do NOT touch the wind tool/ motion blur/ ANY blur until you get better with the other stuff you tried. And dun touch txt tool yet. (<------- Wow. Bitch much, eh? Rofl)

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