Cloud and thunder, storm and rain, I will summon these elements to bring you the most intense pain.
The render is great, as it is positioned at the moment.
At least, I can understand why you chose the text ''Darkness''.
The color scheme is brilliant, and fits the overall piece.
What I'm missing by the way, is depth. If you'd put depth in there, focus on the face, and focus a bit more on the eyes.
In my opinion, flow isn't needed in this kinda tag.
As for the text, the subtext is too small to read.
And I'm definitly liking the lightning.