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    Halo Wars



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    Last edited by ForsakenFX; 06-11-2010 at 03:35 AM.

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    u should have used other color C4Ds.
    These green ones doesnt suit him.
    work on depth.
    Work on lighting..

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    The C4D's are grabbing my attention to much. I see two focal points, and neither of them are master chief. Your lighting is decent, creating sufficient depth for the tag.
    I'm not quite sure whats going on in the left hand side.
    Here's what I would do:
    Lose the border first of all, doesn't work here.
    Find some good effect C4D's and use your blending options, play around a little bit.
    If It were me, I would have used smudging to create my flow instead of slapping on some C4D's going in the same direction, not tryin' to hate on you or anything, it's just what I would have done.
    Also, think about tryin' on some photo filters or gradient maps and then use your blending options on them.
    Just make a new layer, apply image, then copy that layer ( I believe it's CTRL+J ) and then use that new layer to apply your gradient maps/photo filters to and find a good blending option to use them on. Me personally, I like to use 'color' and lower the opacity to 20%-40% depending on the tag or piece I'm doing.

    edit: Also on the color, try to pick colors that will blend more together. If your C4D's are the only parts of the tag that are different colors, then that's where users attention will be focused as opposed to your render.
    I felt like giving a half way decent bit of criticism for once. Hope I helped.
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    ima make v2 now.

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    Did the Criticism help at all?
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    yeah ? o.o

    doesnt it look better blended now?

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    It looks a little bit better.
    If I were you I would just look up some C4D tutorials, and look into using more effect C4D's. If I use C4D's usually I like to use them for effects.
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    I think V1 is better. Instead of green tho, blue would go better.


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    Quote Originally Posted by moosicgawd View Post
    It looks a little bit better.
    If I were you I would just look up some C4D tutorials, and look into using more effect C4D's. If I use C4D's usually I like to use them for effects.
    ohh, im not sure if i know how to do that :3.
    do you mean like use the c4d to make it look like the skin of the render is coming off? that type of effect?

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    u need to use better cuts
    allot of ur cuts have bad edges which kills the tag


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    Effect C4D's are a type of C4D lol.
    and KYLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I miss you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by moosicgawd View Post
    Effect C4D's are a type of C4D lol.
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    +1


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    Quote Originally Posted by Scrcrw View Post
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    +1
    Well it appeared he didn't know what an effect C4D was..
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    Quote Originally Posted by moosicgawd View Post
    Well it appeared he didn't know what an effect C4D was..
    nor wat composition is


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