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    men and women


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    Zappity lines are eww.
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    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    Effects need to blend...

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    yeah this is a test out. didnt add any gmaps yet.

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    i just dont like it
    its like 3 shapes with some pencil
    just basic and boring


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt Preston View Post
    i just dont like it
    its like 3 shapes with some pencil
    just basic and boring
    thats why there's something called CnC . lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt Preston View Post
    i just dont like it
    its like 3 shapes with some pencil
    just basic and boring
    is that something a GFX person should write?

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    hmm Dont really like it :///

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    In my honest opinion, this tag isn't even worth a garbage can.
    Those white lines surrounding the focal, is distracting my eyes off the people.
    Do I need to look at the people? Or do I need to look at the lines? That's the question that comes to my mind when I look at your piece.
    Next to that, those little irritating annoying crosses, why are they there?
    I think that it's a filler, but, I'm not you, so I don't know.
    Next to that, the depth is really badly done.
    The background is way over-blurred, and the focal is way undersharpened.
    Next to that comes that the focal is too wide. Lessen it to maybe only the faces and the chests of the people?
    What I'm missing next, is a light source. Where is it? I can't find it.
    If you try to make one in the upper-right corner, you failed. It is hardly seeable.
    Another thing I'm missing, is flow and a decent color scheme.
    0.0% Flow, and 0.0% color scheme.
    And my last point'll be the border, it's too thin for this kind of signatures.

    Overall, in my honest opinion, I think you didn't even do much, except the lines, the crosses, and the blurred background.


    Quote Originally Posted by Ali G View Post


    is that something a GFX person should write?
    Is this good? Or do I need to waste more time to some newb?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Axel View Post
    In my honest opinion, this tag isn't even worth a garbage can.
    Those white lines surrounding the focal, is distracting my eyes off the people.
    Do I need to look at the people? Or do I need to look at the lines? That's the question that comes to my mind when I look at your piece.
    Next to that, those little irritating annoying crosses, why are they there?
    I think that it's a filler, but, I'm not you, so I don't know.
    Next to that, the depth is really badly done.
    The background is way over-blurred, and the focal is way undersharpened.
    Next to that comes that the focal is too wide. Lessen it to maybe only the faces and the chests of the people?
    What I'm missing next, is a light source. Where is it? I can't find it.
    If you try to make one in the upper-right corner, you failed. It is hardly seeable.
    Another thing I'm missing, is flow and a decent color scheme.
    0.0% Flow, and 0.0% color scheme.
    And my last point'll be the border, it's too thin for this kind of signatures.

    Overall, in my honest opinion, I think you didn't even do much, except the lines, the crosses, and the blurred background.




    Is this good? Or do I need to waste more time to some newb?
    ur CnC was gwd O___o

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ali G View Post

    ur CnC was gwd O___o
    .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ali G View Post


    is that something a GFX person should write?
    yes
    there are some things that we just cant help /


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt Preston View Post
    yes
    there are some things that we just cant help /
    Lawl, lazy ass motherfucker.

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