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    Ben2134: LAOTW Entry

    Hey guys, Kamikaze put his up for display, got some comments so i thought i mine as well too, i thought his was nice, and i hope that some people like mine =)



    Edit: I Fixed it, i think this one looks alot better
    Last edited by ben2134; 07-03-2010 at 04:17 PM.
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    why did you cut the bow? It makes it look worse than you cropping off his elbow.


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    i know... i fucked it up and i've been trying to fix it... and the elbow isn't cropped off, it's like that =)
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    awesome trade with him I went first everthing went PERFECTLY! +1
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    Improvement. Keep it up :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Trianglez View Post
    Improvement. Keep it up :P
    Thanks, i'm actually fixing it atm, i messed up in a couple places...
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    awesome trade with him I went first everthing went PERFECTLY! +1
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    Kk, you should work on the lighting, if you want, pm me and I'll tell you my quick lighting trick that legit takes 10 seconds but has a great effect.

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    the cut off bow is bad


    Shifty sexy shit


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    i fixed it, but i can't edit my LAOTW post to put in the correct picture =(
    Quote Originally Posted by Kibstor View Post
    awesome trade with him I went first everthing went PERFECTLY! +1
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    Better. The text could still use the work and you might want to smudge the actual artist signature from the bottom right.

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    ill let u edit it if u want
    doc wont mind


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    Quote Originally Posted by Scrcrw View Post
    ill let u edit it if u want
    doc wont mind
    That would be awesome, do you want me to send you the link? i messed up really bad on the first one, i didn't know till i had the 7th, or i would have worked on it longer lol, since it was friday, i thought it was the deadline =P
    Quote Originally Posted by Kibstor View Post
    awesome trade with him I went first everthing went PERFECTLY! +1
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    just make a new post
    ill tell shayne its k


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