Blane could make a text tutorial and make tons of money if he wanted... *sigh*
I like the concept, and it was a good attempt at his text.
I wanna try something with this if you're willing to send me the .psd...
I've noticed this with a with a few of your tags,
and it's really the only thing I dislike.
Your Bg's are always nice..props for that.
But try to get some different colors in your focals,
or at least maintain it's original integrity somehow.
I think if you used some subtle purple lighting on the render,
ie; shoulders, under elbow, and behind neck, would look bad ass.
But making the whole render purple kind of kills it imo.
Also, for depth reasons, I would try to work some type of effects in front of the render.
Text isn't bad, but I would also practice with lighting.