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    Daft Punk (Not so good ): )

    V1:


    V1(Borders):


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    V2(Borders):


    V3:


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    V1 with borders for

    Too much white at the head on the right side?

    aw wells. its alot better compared to mine.
    I see what you did there.

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    You lied to me, you said you would stop the text ):
    Anyways, it's never a good idea to use 2 focals, and they're too sharp. Also, don't get FHS (Floating Head Syndrome). You need parts of the body to make it work. The colors clash in an unsightly way too. The white stuff behind the focal is very odd, and not flowing or anything. It's just there. Another thing, purple/orange gradient maps don't always make it good. Just a tip.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ViciousArt
    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragon View Post
    You lied to me, you said you would stop the text ):
    Anyways, it's never a good idea to use 2 focals, and they're too sharp. Also, don't get FHS (Floating Head Syndrome). You need parts of the body to make it work. The colors clash in an unsightly way too. The white stuff behind the focal is very odd, and not flowing or anything. It's just there. Another thing, purple/orange gradient maps don't always make it good. Just a tip.
    KIU


    Sorry for the text/
    Anyway, I actually ran out of ideas on the middle of the signature, most of the c4d wouldn't match :\
    And for the head floating, didn't know that it ruined the sig, :/
    And i'm still practicing about the sharp thing, just a question, do I click "Sharp Edges" once or twice? Do I click "Sharp" once or twice? Because i'm using it twice


    Life without you have no meaning.
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    I would fight an army for you.
    I would give my life for you.
    I would make you smile for everytime that it's out of your beautiful face.
    I would fight the GODS to be with you.
    I would DO ANYTHING to be with you.
    I cry everyday at night thinking of you.
    I feel like jumping out of a bridge when thinking of you.
    I die a little bit for every second that I think about you.

    But yet we're not meant to be together.

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    Quote Originally Posted by StopWhinin View Post
    V1 with borders for

    Too much white at the head on the right side?

    aw wells. its alot better compared to mine.
    I agree i like V1(borders) i think that one looks the best. Good job
    new sig/tag:


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    Quote Originally Posted by ~AfroNinja~ View Post
    Sorry for the text/
    Anyway, I actually ran out of ideas on the middle of the signature, most of the c4d wouldn't match :\
    And for the head floating, didn't know that it ruined the sig, :/
    And i'm still practicing about the sharp thing, just a question, do I click "Sharp Edges" once or twice? Do I click "Sharp" once or twice? Because i'm using it twice
    Once "sharp" is fine.
    Quote Originally Posted by ViciousArt
    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    I like the style used on V2. Though it looks way too over sharpened, if you want an easy way just to create some depth, just apply the image blur it one or twice, then erase the parts in the foreground such as the renders, and it will just be an easy way to get some cheap depth into your piece. Then just just apply image again, sharpen it up once, erase the background, to really bring your piece out. I agree with dragon that two renders is never a good idea, and right now it looks too over cluttered with parts that aren't really necessary.
    Your learning and improving at a good pace, keep going.

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    v3 for sure.

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