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    Devin - Skate

    I just really liked this picture from Friday when I was out skating with some friends.
    I was playing around with it.

    Now give me real criticism that can sink through my mind and give a thorough or at least sufficient explanation on what i can do, don't be a dumbass.

    I really don't know the tri-photo thing under the text, I just keep seeing it and thought i'd try it.

    Yea yea, arial font, fail shading, layered fractal image, whatever

    I didnt edit the picture itself, just added the arrows, the fractal, the text, and everything else
    the picture was like that when I took it.



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    I'd like to see more along the lines of those arrows.
    Burn the edges, dodge the middle (a tiny bit), and sharpen the focal, and it should be good.

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    T_T i don't understand Photoshopspeak.


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    u need to think about ur compo
    especially of ur photo
    rule of thirds is 10x more important
    as well there are lines and vectors, plus the golden swirl
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    Quote Originally Posted by shaheenster View Post
    Until i googled it, i though bokeh was a type of jap porn

    sums up wat i though

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    I haven't taken tutorials on photoshopping or picture taking
    i really don't know what you're saying....


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    then tbh ur gonna go no where
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    Quote Originally Posted by shaheenster View Post
    Until i googled it, i though bokeh was a type of jap porn

    sums up wat i though

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    Never said I didn't want to.
    I'm just too bus to spend time reading stuff because i have school work, and minioning to worry about.
    Not to forget hanging out with friends and cleaning up my house.


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    u read something in 5 mins
    take shots when u can
    just have ur camera with me
    srsly atm ive got school, moving house and packing and my life, plus playing CF
    so what do i do
    try and have my camera with me and make some time for photography
    5 mins to read any new lessons in the academy
    there is no point buying a nice slr and not learning how to use it
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    Quote Originally Posted by shaheenster View Post
    Until i googled it, i though bokeh was a type of jap porn

    sums up wat i though

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    Quote Originally Posted by Still butthurt faggot View Post
    u read something in 5 mins
    take shots when u can
    just have ur camera with me
    srsly atm ive got school, moving house and packing and my life, plus playing CF
    so what do i do
    try and have my camera with me and make some time for photography
    5 mins to read any new lessons in the academy
    there is no point buying a nice slr and not learning how to use it
    It's the family camera, we've had it for almost 2 years+
    it's pretty old.
    I just started using it last week because my brother was hogging it for his band shows and when he went to the skate park / clubbing or just hanging out at parties.
    so i don't know.

    If i have to read tutorials and such, they better have some definitions with them / explanations
    I don't take the camera everywhere, especially not at school
    only on special days, as im the historian for a club (pictures / video / etc


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