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    Question FIRST SIG PLEASE CRITIQUE

    Changed it all round abit. Tell me wat u think.
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    whoring to much... text kills it, especially when you place it on the border.
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    looks like all you did was put a spiderman render over a background and added one or two poorly placed c4ds.

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    Any better??

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    humpsta get rid of the white shit change you c4d use a bubble one or none at all until you get better with them use one like tis i will send to you on msn

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    agen, any better??

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    edit: of and humpsta insted of uploading a new post just click edit then its makes it messy and less likely banned for spam
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    now it looks like its having a glow on the outside...just put this on a rest and choose another on the render is fail so fail will surpass your opportunity of success

    lighting is all wrong too... wall is dark ok... but lighting comes from the lowerleft... while the car light under neat his body doesnt get any source of lighting... but this is later worries just improve it is better then most start id say not?
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