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    Another Try.....

    I decided to try this out again. I tried to make the colors blend more. Proper Constructive Criticism

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    i like the theme

    the dropshadow makes it look horrible

    take it out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hemp View Post
    i like the theme

    the dropshadow makes it look horrible

    take it out.
    Yea my friend told me it looks professional and better but i can't do them good.

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    The drop shadow makes it pop out more, so it's more unique to me.
    Other wise good job, try to add more things to it though than just three glow areas and your name.
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    who ever told you drop shadow looks good is trolling.


    only pop out that looks good is if the render pops out of it thats it

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    pretty good as lonsome said add some c4d with it

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    Looks like 2 different stocks were used?

    The people in the background..I dunno..
    Seems like it's throwing the theme off.
    Here we got bad ass Hancock as the focal,
    then these 2 lovebirds in an alley, being all gay.
    Then we have that red brushing or whatever it in front of the focal,
    That doesn't need to be there.

    Overall you're getting better.
    The quality opposed to your prior work is a step up compared to your others.
    Try to work on composition, color balance,effects, and adjustment layers

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    Hancock .

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    Quote Originally Posted by xsinxzerox backup View Post
    Hancock .
    Hancock .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Not Bawls View Post
    Looks like 2 different stocks were used?

    The people in the background..I dunno..
    Seems like it's throwing the theme off.
    Here we got bad ass Hancock as the focal,
    then these 2 lovebirds in an alley, being all gay.
    Then we have that red brushing or whatever it in front of the focal,
    That doesn't need to be there.

    Overall you're getting better.
    The quality opposed to your prior work is a step up compared to your others.
    Try to work on composition, color balance,effects, and adjustment layers
    It looked a lot better on Photoshop. Thats why it looks so bad on here -_-

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