1. The text makes no sense in placement or actual text effects.
2. The render's hand is cut off, so you have some retarded looking render with half its left hand cut off.
3. Much less what they can't see anything as a theme. I mean you just have a bright light with random placement. If what they are "seeing" is a laser shot to the vagina, i think she should be blind.
4.You just put some random C4d's in there too. And you put them OVER the render.
5.What is that green shit on her left arm?
6. Why does the beam suddenly cut off? Why is at that angle?
Honestly its not good at all. The "lighting" is good? Pfft. yeah right.