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    New pic I made.

    Thought it turned out decent. Comments?


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    Looks pretty low quality..
    too much slop on your focal, so I would work on composition.
    Also..what is up with her lower half? Too much erased man.

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    Try erasing parts of the C4Ds or fractals that you used. Also she starts to disappear at the bottom.
    Text is amateur, but it's alright.

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    Better or worse? I erased a little off the fractals, changed the hair to eliminate the poor rendering there, and added the dress so it was less erased.


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    Mmm, you can't just get rid of someone's hair because it looks bad. Lol, this really isn't any better.

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    I think I kinda grasp what he was going for in this.. it's just a thought I guess
    But how 'culture' is changing, and fading... Like japan, There's not many 'hard working' types.. just pencil pushers and outcasts..

    Only an idea though o-o

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    Mmm, you can't just get rid of someone's hair because it looks bad. Lol, this really isn't any better.
    Why not damit..lol. How else am I supposed to fix it? Other than using a different render? I didn't try to completely eliminate it, just fade it out a little so the eraser line is less noticable.

    Quote Originally Posted by taken4time View Post
    I think I kinda grasp what he was going for in this.. it's just a thought I guess
    But how 'culture' is changing, and fading... Like japan, There's not many 'hard working' types.. just pencil pushers and outcasts..

    Only an idea though o-o
    Sure.
    Last edited by CrazyConservative; 11-03-2010 at 11:30 PM.

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    Idk. Just try and follow this rule, do not cover your render/focal.
    It's okay sometimes like if you have a full body focal like you do now, my limits to covering the render would be just like her lower body, not her face.
    You want the focal to pop, not hide behind background effects.

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