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    Abstract / Pentooling Tag.

    Just messing around with sizes, pentooling, gradient maps, etc. I think it looks pretty shitty seeing as there was no inspiration for me to make this, except Elton John songs, haha.

    Anyways, rate it, give me advice, etc.



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    Last edited by Shojo; 11-07-2010 at 10:39 AM.

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    Actually, It looks pretty sick except for the text. If the text was smaller and kind of in the chaos below it it would blend better and look better. Other than the text it flows together nice.

    7.2/10

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    Thanks. I might actually go no text on this one, I just can't decide where to put it.

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    I think no text at all would be best. The colours are nice and it has some interesting elements.

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    That was flame? We were just stating the truth.
    Oh well, that's what happens. And since this post might get deleted...

    It need's work, stuff like this needs to be sharp, very sharp and sharp edges. Look, everything is soft, rendering it kind of ugly.
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    Lose the text or change the color. Maybe you could try writing you name with the pen tool. It looks like it says Sy off to the right.

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    Its really nice, the lighting in the middle wasn't needed tho.

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