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    Work In Progress.

    Work in progress, how could i improve this? I know I still need to work on depth and blending, how should I go about doing this? There are still some serious flaws on working on aswell, but I am determined to make this decent.

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    Is there a face or something on the right side hidden in the green? If so, remove that.

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    It looks like you tried to create depth with the background. It's not really working if that was the intent. I'd try blurring and sharping it a little. The render is just bad quality. You can almost see through her in some areas it looks like it was a picture from google that you went around with a soft brush trying to render it.

    Note the semi-transparent boxlike line going through her wrist.

    Also the backround doesn't mix very well.

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    Yepp and also ther is way too much crap on top of her atm. Yeah and ive started with the beginnings of depth in the background

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    looks good

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