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    In need of criticism

    well, i was learning sig making for a while. the rest of my other sigs looks fine but certainly not this one.



    idk wad's wrong with it. i ensured the flow was nice. but it still looks fucked.

    Ctiticism please, harsh/kind. im from the rez. modding section, so i accept all kinds of criticism.
    I see what you did there.

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    Hmmm looks fine but have you tried laying a few C4D's? 8/10.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Soladis View Post
    Hmmm looks fine but have you tried laying a few C4D's? 8/10.
    tried some at around the focal; the hand. its light blue. not sure how to make it stand out.
    I see what you did there.

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    Mmm kinda basic. And I would move the text closer to the render.

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    Not just any criticism, constructive.

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    you may also wanna try making it smaller, cause i did that and it made it look better than all my other big ones..
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    Quote Originally Posted by KABLE View Post
    Not just any criticism, constructive.
    in the rez. section we give..... extreme criticism at times.


    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    Mmm kinda basic. And I would move the text closer to the render.
    mmk. thanks. something stills fucks me, maybe the arrows and rectangles?
    I see what you did there.

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    mmk. thanks. something stills fucks me, maybe the arrows and rectangles?
    Hmm are those arrows C4D's or Brushes?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Soladis View Post


    Hmm are those arrows C4D's or Brushes?
    not c4d, some brushes and some rectangular maranquee. w/e u spell it...
    I see what you did there.

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    yea make it smaller then try a C4D in the background set on Screen or Color Dodge. May Help.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Soladis View Post
    yea make it smaller then try a C4D in the background set on Screen or Color Dodge. May Help.
    normal or effect c4d's?
    I see what you did there.

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    just like a regular C4D that looks like its spraying from the inside out.
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    That would be an effect C4d.

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    mmk i got it.

    wad happens if the c4d is too light? background is light soo..
    I see what you did there.

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    just switch the effects then. Like the color dodge for example, too light or colorful hit it on screen.
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