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    i be practicing my pentooling

    im starting to practice pentooling
    i dont like lps but still

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    think about ur compo
    the main reason this is ugly is cause it looks messy and unthought
    and ur tooling is choppy aswell


    Shifty sexy shit


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    yes thats why im practicing /yea

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    Definitely a great thing to practice.
    As Sam said, composition.
    It's key when it comes to the pentool.
    This really applies to every aspect of this tool I think too.
    When you vector, you have to use it like a scalpel.
    The colors aren't toooo bad, but there are a few there that just don't meld well.
    For me it's the black white and blues that chuck the harmony off.

    Try not to congest things so much.
    It can pass as abstract for sure,
    but there are some elements in there that just don't make it seem authentic.
    It looks to me like a new artist struggling, or trying too hard at perfection.
    Think of a natural flow.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post
    Definitely a great thing to practice.
    As Sam said, composition.
    It's key when it comes to the pentool.
    This really applies to every aspect of this tool I think too.
    When you vector, you have to use it like a scalpel.
    The colors aren't toooo bad, but there are a few there that just don't meld well.
    For me it's the black white and blues that chuck the harmony off.

    Try not to congest things so much.
    It can pass as abstract for sure,
    but there are some elements in there that just don't make it seem authentic.
    It looks to me like a new artist struggling, or trying too hard at perfection.
    Think of a natural flow.
    Mostly every time I try to critique someone, Ethereal comes along and basically retypes everything I type.
    Usually what I do about this is that I type one unnecessary thing no one else will ever say or just troll around (I don't like to do that).
    Don't worry ethereal, I don't hate you, keep reading my mind. I'm just expressing my feelings. I'll handle my anger somehow. <3

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    Pick like three or four colors and use them fluently. Kinda choppy at places and stuff. Pretty much what they said.

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    yea i didnt like this one too much but it was just too use the pentool i agree its a little choppy and the blue circle kind of goes with a more urban feel so yeah need to work on putting everything together better
    also why the fuck is eth not trolling

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    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    yea i didnt like this one too much but it was just too use the pentool i agree its a little choppy and the blue circle kind of goes with a more urban feel so yeah need to work on putting everything together better
    also why the fuck is eth not trolling
    Cause I want something beautiful to look at.

    Get it done, or the troll is unleashed.

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    Oh shit that's not happening

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