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    Lloyd Banks



    you said to try something new..i did. and well.. imo it sucks.

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    More interesting than you last, in my opinion.

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    Nice try at xprophet style.
    Only thing I would say to change is the contrast on his face, the brightness around his head, and the lighted effects around the tag should be brighter.
    KIU.
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    this is really good, but i think the only thing your missing is the abstract c4ds.
    i like it and its a good style to follow kiu

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    I like it, it still has a lot of the same elements from your last style but this is definitely better. I'm a fan of actual pictures, not just render and C4Ds. The fact that there is a background makes it look better imo.

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    heh..i only know how to make dark themed tags..i totally suck at bright ones..

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    One thing I just noticed:

    There is a C4D or two going from the bottom left corner towards the top right and it goes across the render, I would lose it. It makes it look kind of flat.

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    Very nice, better that your recent ones in my opinion

    take out the scan lines going across the tag, its a huge distraction for me
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    hmm....scan lines?

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    Don't worry they don't know the style.

    I'd say if you could go back and edit the background. Make it so that there is no white at the top. Easy way to do this is render the white out with pentool, then just duplicate the stock underneath it and move it so that it looks natural.

    Other than that, try not to oversharpen, the style really depends on getting the sharpen right, especially with the fractals and such. I think you got the composition well done though.

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    I think he meant the fence thing in the Bg =scanlines ?

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    nono , one of the effect c4d's in the middle has a stretched appearance that makes it look like a scan line to me. I mistook it
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    Scanlines are a pattern, thats why i said that. But yea he needs to remove that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by shaheenster View Post
    nono , one of the effect c4d's in the middle has a stretched appearance that makes it look like a scan line to me. I mistook it
    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    One thing I just noticed:

    There is a C4D or two going from the bottom left corner towards the top right and it goes across the render, I would lose it. It makes it look kind of flat.
    You two hatin' on xProphet's fractals.

    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post
    Don't worry they don't know the style.

    I'd say if you could go back and edit the background. Make it so that there is no white at the top. Easy way to do this is render the white out with pentool, then just duplicate the stock underneath it and move it so that it looks natural.

    Other than that, try not to oversharpen, the style really depends on getting the sharpen right, especially with the fractals and such. I think you got the composition well done though.
    That's more like it.

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    colours on the render are weird, as doc said u also need to fix the white in the bg
    other than that dont over shapen, better than ur other ones though


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