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    What I did during our break

    Hello dear GFX members

    So while MPGH was down, I watched some tuts. I know I'm not pro, but i'm proud of what i made during that time :



    1. I made this one with a tut for the smudge tool. I like it.



    2. I made this one with a tut using the ocean background style, and some squares.



    3. I made this one with a tut for the color changing and the levels....



    4. THIS ONE IS THE FIRST SIG THAT I MADE WITHOUT ANY TUT AND USING WHA I LEARNED. I'M PROUD OF IT. DON'T BE MEAN PLZ.



    5. I made it for Swiftdude as a little gift.


    I want constructive commentary. I want to know what's wrong and what's good.If you are here to scam, gtfo.
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    i like the way you use your colors in all these
    pretty decent blending
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    dont use those squares
    work on your text more

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    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    scam?
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    i like the way you use your colors in all these
    pretty decent blending
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    dont use those squares
    work on your text more
    I meant flame Sorry.

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    I agree about the square things, but these are pretty good for a novice. They are interesting, and you don't spam them with effects like other people. I say work on your focal, and composition, like the rule of thirds

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    You sound really awkward talking like that

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    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    You sound really awkward talking like that
    You talking to me?


    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    You sound really awkward talking like that
    You talking to me?

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    Did you mean to do that ^^?

    All of them have their flaws but overall they're alright. Lose the square stuff like the others said. It makes your render seem kind of flat and part of the background which its not. One of your signatures was really bothering me, the car one. I just figured out it was a car, make it a little more clear. If you can't tell what the focal/render is where am I supposed to look .

    You need to work a little bit more on your flow and blending. Some other things you can work on is depth and text but I wouldn't worry about that "as much" right now.

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    Thank you all guyz. I'll work on my texts, and I won't use squares anymore ^^

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    what that was a car!

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    mmkay, keep it up though i see some potential in you

    if you need any help, add me on msn.

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    Nahh it was a double post merge.

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    Yea that happened to me b4 lol. But yours was kinda cool. lol

    are you talking to me?
    Are you talking to me?!

    lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    mmkay, keep it up though i see some potential in you

    if you need any help, add me on msn.
    you talking to me?
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    no, i was talking to mods.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    mmkay, keep it up though i see some potential in you

    if you need any help, add me on msn.
    Yeah! Let me 2 or 3 century, and I'll be good

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