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    Cnc please.



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    the streaks in the bg are a bit odd, dont really fit
    the c4ds are a bit too bright, u need to work on working with white


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    What do you mean by working with white?

    and is this better?


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    thats better
    and by working with white i mean knowing how to use white when doing bright stuff


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    I would get rid of the streaks completely.
    Really hard to make effects from scratch, so it's like text; if you can't do it well, best not to do it.
    I think that's a space stock on the left right? Take that out, those generally make the area they're over LQ.
    Also, try and establish where you want your light sources to be early on so you can burn and dodge accordingly.
    For example, you have the blue source down by his arm (his right, your left), yet that whole side of his body is dark.
    Color scheme for the last thing...not sure how well black/gray, blue, white, and red go together...

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    i like the c4ds here but as in all your stuff theres a brightness and sharpness problem

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post
    I would get rid of the streaks completely.
    Really hard to make effects from scratch, so it's like text; if you can't do it well, best not to do it.
    I think that's a space stock on the left right? Take that out, those generally make the area they're over LQ.
    Also, try and establish where you want your light sources to be early on so you can burn and dodge accordingly.
    For example, you have the blue source down by his arm (his right, your left), yet that whole side of his body is dark.
    Color scheme for the last thing...not sure how well black/gray, blue, white, and red go together...
    Alright I'll try and take this into consideration next time I make something. And I chuckled a little when you said "I think that's a space stock on the left right" it confused me :O

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post


    Alright I'll try and take this into consideration next time I make something. And I chuckled a little when you said "I think that's a space stock on the left right" it confused me :O
    Lol oh. Sorry about that.
    Left, correct?

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    It's actually over the whole thing but I erased it in some parts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    It's actually over the whole thing but I erased it in some parts.
    Erase in moar parts.

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    Lmao. I'll just try not to use them anymore.