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    cnc and rate pls

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    The black c4ds are nice but The black ones need to gtfo crop it just a tiny bit on the left it seems too empty there work on your colors try to keep a consistent color scheme instead of different clashing colors
    6/10

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    Lose the text, work on flow. and lose the blue c4ds.

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    Text looks horrible. Render doesn't match colors. Anyways, good job
    Edit : 5.5/10

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    Place in recycle bin.

    lol jk.

    Lose borders. Lose text. Lose blue c4d.

    Gain lighting.
    Gain depth.
    Gain effects other than shitty placed c4d's that don't blend.
    Gain adjustment layers.
    Gain desirable colors, opposed to these drab boring colors.

    That is all.
    Last edited by Ethereal; 01-03-2011 at 08:48 PM.

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    Dear Mister Krister,
    I truly find an unescesery C4D spam.
    The colors of the c4ds don't match with the render,
    You shall probably remove the blue c4d imo.
    Also the text shall be start over, i truly dislike it.
    Keep on working and reading tutorials.
    I'd give it 5/10
    Kind Regards,
    Android.

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    well its pretty good but get rid of the text.
    I rate it 6/10


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