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    anything i can fix? or add?



    Cnc pls and please give feedback, Title explains it

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    Too plain for me. Effects are out of place.
    Your text could be better too.

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    add a lot more
    you have way too much negative space
    bring the render to the left so its on the right third line
    add more into it so it brings the tag together


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Looks very much like a wip maybe the first phase
    Add more effect to the empty space the effects around him need to be moved the same relative place but move them a little

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    Too plain for me. Effects are out of place.
    Your text could be better too.
    yeah kinda plain, and text is hard

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Krister View Post
    yeah kinda plain, and text is hard
    just dont do text

    besides BLANE the majority of artists dont do text


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Never use text on most sigs like this 1 Make the c4ds more visble in background but not alot other than that its pretty good

    Never do what you wont do.

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    Take out the text. Try to fill up the negative space with a C4D, or maybe move the render. Also, use gradient maps / photo philters.