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    Sylar



    More smudge. Getting better i think. c&c as always,

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    the lion is too far to the right and the render too far to the right
    the smudging is getting better
    i would recommend checking out elf and seeing if you can get a hold of some of his psds, will help a lot with your smudging


    Shifty sexy shit


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    I hope the smudging was all you focused on cuz everything else seems kind of pasted with limited blending.

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    And you taught basically everyone here how?


    I think smudging is definitely a thing that you haven't done before you're good at everything else but that it's getting better from the other ones I've seen
    It also looks LQ on my iPod that's probably not the case but considering other things don't look like that Im assuming this is either really small or LQ

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fjsieb View Post
    And you taught basically everyone here how?
    cause hes good at large art and c4d tags


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    Quote Originally Posted by Fjsieb View Post
    And you taught basically everyone here how?


    I think smudging is definitely a thing that you haven't done before you're good at everything else but that it's getting better from the other ones I've seen
    It also looks LQ on my iPod that's probably not the case but considering other things don't look like that Im assuming this is either really small or LQ
    He stopped for a pretty long while.
    He's still better than a lot of us talent-wise.

    Keep going at it Kyle.

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    Yeah good at everything but smudging

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fjsieb View Post
    Yeah good at everything but smudging
    There's smudge ones in there. Especially the first.
    Know what you're talking about before you criticize someone.

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    Yeah I accept my mistake
    I just thought that this looked way below par from him its been a long time
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    I kind of trail off from the focal in this one, maybe because of the length of the tag.

    keep it up, practice makes perfect

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    Only issue I really see is overall compo.
    Smudging improved style wise,
    all you really need to do is work on some organization with your trails.

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    I'll take out the lion and do something with the focal mmmm.




    The render was b/w when i started with it so its been really hard to colour :/ Took out the lion to draw attention to the focal. Sharpen the left side to give it more emphasis too.
    Last edited by Kyle; 01-22-2011 at 02:59 AM.


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    it looks better in black and white
    add some more contrast and do something about your focal, your main focal is too pale compared to the rest of the sig.

    your smudging is well done though, keep it up.

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    yea def. better in black and white