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    First Signature

    This is my first signature:


    Please tell me if its good or bad.
    And how can I improve and where.
    And rate it from 1 to 10.
    Thank you.



     
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    Not the worst I've seen
    The lens flare isn't working the render seems to be a little unproportional
    It's too empty but the small amount of effects that are there aren't bad

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fjsieb View Post
    Not the worst I've seen
    The lens flare isn't working the render seems to be a little unproportional
    It's too empty but the small amount of effects that are there aren't bad
    Thank You,can you show me how to make more effects but that they fit to the image?



     
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    Quote Originally Posted by ©®o$s ƒi®E™ View Post
    Thank You,can you show me how to make more effects but that they fit to the image?
    Its not so much putting more effects in. Its fitting the effects to the image. For instance the lens flare should be behind the render, and then some soft brushing on a clipping mask of the render to create the light edges on the focal.


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    These are some more,which is the best?




    If you got any tutorials can you pass it on please,but not with hard english?



     
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    I think that you should blend more the render into the smudging...

    And its kinda too much empty

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    add some c4d's as well.
    they are pretty damn good for first sigs however. great work!

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    Way to empty, and the Lens Flare is in the wrong spot, it looks misplaced. Everything else is pretty decent. Test is kind of just "there" make it blend in with the background. Try some C4D's. For your first one it's pretty nice.
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    You need to work on blending and effects. Not bad for a first though