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    Working with the C4Ds



    left side is no good right?


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    on right looks like its behind and on left looks like its infront. looks like one of those mind trick pictures

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    i dont see a focal?

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    Too monotone and that thing in the bottom left doesnt fit in

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    The C4D's look bad. Work on blending, creating flow, lighting, depth, you know all that jazz. And yeah without a focal point there's no point in the piece. It's just space.
    The night fades with a breath of sunshine.

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    C4ds are meant to enhance the focal and compliment it. These C4ds basically drag my eyes from the center to the outer parts of the sig. You need to work on composition. If I look anywhere on your sig, my eyes should naturally fall onto the focal.

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    To add onto what Ryan said, how you used your C4D's are virtually pointless. I'm not trying to hate on you or anything by any means. Just read some tutorials man. Download some C4D packs. Read up on the elements and principles of art.
    The night fades with a breath of sunshine.

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    you should analyze your own work useing the 4 frames and ask yourself if you think its good

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    thanks everyone
    will do a V2, still searching for my style

    lawl 4 frames : structural, subjective, cultural, postmodern
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