C4ds are meant to enhance the focal and compliment it. These C4ds basically drag my eyes from the center to the outer parts of the sig. You need to work on composition. If I look anywhere on your sig, my eyes should naturally fall onto the focal.
To add onto what Ryan said, how you used your C4D's are virtually pointless. I'm not trying to hate on you or anything by any means. Just read some tutorials man. Download some C4D packs. Read up on the elements and principles of art.