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    [WIP] Breakdancer.

    Yo faggots, help me out.
    What should I remove, and what should I add? Help me.


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    isn't that the wrong section?
    ehm...

    this is just awesome dude
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sentrax82 View Post
    isn't that the wrong section?
    ehm...

    this is just awesome dude
    Before the big fuck-up people always posted WIP's in the show-off section, so

    Anyways, thanks


    Fuck no wait you're right, this IS the wrong section.
    fucking hell, what do I hate this new fucking sub-sections shit.
    Ryan, get your ass over here and move this shit.

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    On the left the effects from his arm..the red c4d thingy should be a different colour ..

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    its awesome! GJ
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    Too many different colors on effects, and you've got two flow directions so far, which isn't working.

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    The blue effect in the leg should flow with the right effect.



     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post
    Too many different colors on effects, and you've got two flow directions so far, which isn't working.
    Colors can be fixed easily, and I'll work on the flow shit.

    Quote Originally Posted by ©®o$s ƒi®E™ View Post
    The blue effect in the leg should flow with the right effect.
    I don't understand a fucking word of what you just said.

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    Add a different background, think it would look more creative



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    Quote Originally Posted by vansguy247 View Post
    Add a different background, think it would look more creative
    Like what ?

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    like street or school

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    Quote Originally Posted by Helger View Post
    like street or school
    IMO, the effects won't be that awesome, then.

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    Quote Originally Posted by .Amnesia View Post


    IMO, the effects won't be that awesome, then.
    Valid point.

    Adding in a bg like that would just create noise between the effects and the bg, which is just annoying and it looks bad.
    Sometimes, simple backgrounds are the best choice.
    Like this one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    Valid point.

    Adding in a bg like that would just create noise between the effects and the bg, which is just annoying and it looks bad.
    Sometimes, simple backgrounds are the best choice.
    Like this one.
    Ryan the fuck help me out man.

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    Get rid of the dark C4D behind the blue one.
    Either take the ones on his shoulder out, reloacate them, or change the flow to match them. Regardless, they're all the same length, which is a little strange to look at.
    Blur the shadow on the ground more, and lower the opacity to make it look realistic. Maybe even scale it out to make it wider.
    To make the floor a little more realistic, on the canvas behind everything:

    1. Fill with white.
    2. Do some black soft brushing on lower opacity about 2/3 of the way down from the top of the canvas.
    3. Copy the original white canvas over the brushing layer, and move it up a bit so that only the bottom half of the brushing is showing.

    Simple wall-to-floor technique.

    That will also bring your shadow out more.

    Post your results after that and I'll see what else you can do.

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