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    Wow good Outcome

    This is really a good outcome.

    Suggestions are welcomed, Oh please rate it 0/10.
    Thanks for your feedback

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    looks good
    not my style tho
    lightning a bit fake IMO
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    The light on the left looks really unnatural and IMO it wouldnt be able to reach the render with that intensity the lighting in the bg doesn't work well either i think it needs some more effects
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    Removed the light.
    Now, what effects should i put on it?

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    No whats suponed to be illuminating the render and everything else
    And there's also some random black space keep some kind of light source but make It look realistic

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    It's supposed the light is on Fisher's back (Render)

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    You're render is awkwardly placed and the effects are limited and don't really flow well. Blending and lighting could be a lot better and I would suggest losing the text and possibly adding some cinematic boarders or something, it just looks a bit weird right now.

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    The render needs to blend with the background a bit more, try gradient maps and photo filters.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jazk Pete View Post
    It's supposed the light is on Fisher's back (Render)
    It's coming from the wrong side the light is on the right