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    New Crysis..

    v1

    Rate.

    v2

    v3

    Rate+CnC please
    Last edited by Dorado; 03-05-2011 at 09:16 PM.



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    I like the colors but the white lightsource isn't the best
    It's a little too empty for my taste but i like the look of it overall

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    Maybe this second one is better?

    Less emptyness.. and I changed the lighing a bit



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    The 1st is definitely better, imo. Seems a little over-sharpened, but its not a fatal dose, so I might survive to see your next work.
    The 2nd = his shoulder is blurred the hell out, as if his arms had such definition to span 2 miles. Actually, I don't even see a reason to the blur on him at all; he is the focal point, and if he were a physical object that you were viewing from a personal conversation's point of view, there wouldn't be much depth, unless you're to the edge of completely blind.

    In all, it was okay. The lighting for both needs some work, though the 2nd was an improvement. Too much empty space.
    Last edited by Killian; 03-05-2011 at 12:11 PM.

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    Needs something on the left.
    Would like to see more colors, it's monochromatic.
    Also, the text doesn't really compliment the piece therefore it's pointless.
    Not too bad though.

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    get a new light source and remove text and it will be aight


    Shifty sexy shit


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    maybe v3 is better.



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    YESSSS, GOOD.


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    Nice i like v3 job

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    I didn't rip this one..



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    Search it up on tineye...
    I've on;y posted this pic on DA, GFXRes., and here..



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    very nice gj

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    Thanks Kudi


    v4..

    cleaned it up a bit
    Last edited by Dorado; 03-06-2011 at 09:19 AM.



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