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    Snowy

    w/

    w/o topaz

    v3

    Please CnC
    Last edited by Dorado; 03-19-2011 at 05:14 AM.



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    I think everyone that uses this render tosses it on a snowy mountain stock.
    This was mine I made ages ago.



    Anyway about the sig.
    Again I'm gonna suggest that you stop using topaz.
    It's killing your depth, and it looks to obvious.
    (Especially the mountain+c4d.)
    Topaz is good to use if you have like some really rough edges on some thing,
    but you want to apply your image when using it, so that way you can erase most of the topaz.

    I think the c4d you used just throws the feel of this tag off.
    The composition is rather basic, and no offense but kind of boring.
    The white to black just seems a bit too conflicting for me.
    I do like whatever you used for the lighting effects,
    I dunno man..I personally would have took a different approach,
    maybe use some clipping masks and fractals for effects,
    or maybe some flares.

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    "but you want to apply your image when using it, so that way you can erase most of the topaz."
    That's exactly what I did..



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    Quote Originally Posted by Dorado View Post
    "but you want to apply your image when using it, so that way you can erase most of the topaz."
    That's exactly what I did..
    Ok well you didn't erase enough then,
    because it's pretty obvious..
    look at the mountains dude..all the alias lines.

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    Here's without any topaz



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    I think that the urring pretty mich killed the depth it could have had and the c4d isn't helping with the flow of the original render I actually like the black and white approach but maybe it could have been a less solid black though the lighting effects around the render are done well enough to not ruin the sig but Actially compliment it maybe you shouldve added those effects in some different areas

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    Thats not bad at all .
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