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    Swirly KillZone


    v2

    please rate
    Last edited by Dorado; 03-26-2011 at 10:06 AM.



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    It's not bad except for the fact that the render feels out of place. The colors just feel off or something. Try and fix that.

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    The render feels to sharp for the background. The background seems so abstract, so blurred but the render is sharp and seems to have its own place. Very Strange.

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    Added v2..


    Fixed the sharpness and the blending



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    v2 is better imo

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    the render feels outa place, and the bg is too blurry


    Shifty sexy shit


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    i like it v2

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    Those fractal looking things are way too blurry and soft they just give a really weird feel to this overall the render is like WTF am I doing here I should be in some c4d whored sig it feels out of place with the whole blurr background

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    the render looks sepaarate form the pic make it one picture...

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    Quote Originally Posted by FilthYy View Post
    the render looks sepaarate form the pic make it one picture...
    At this point you're only repeating what has been said.

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    nice i like the second version