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    My second sig - 300

    CnC please

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    Thats pretty good for a second effort. text sucks tho.

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    I dislike it, the gradient you used should have been an adjustment layer not a square block. There is no direct light source and no real blending. Text is not fitting and no sense of flow. I would read up on some tutorials.

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    Lol i don't think it was a square block, it just looks like one cause i have a border. By the way, how do you delete threads? I forgot about this one and posted the sig again.

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    First thing I notice is the clashing of themes in this.

    Your render has a dark theme that brings thoughts of death and battle and such into my mind. So I see the render and then it has a pink theme to it with some C4Ds thrown in the BG that give it a very strange feel.

    Another thing is the lighting. It really just doesn't have a light source. You got light coming from all over, that works if you actually have a source. The assumed source is the sun otherwise your need some sort of light fixture or something. You got light behind him and light around the shield and then it stops.

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    preatty good job second one is better then your first one