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    "Lost In Translation"

    Ehh, first signature in a LONG time lol. Trying to get back into the swing of things.



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    I have just one question: What the fuck is that?
    CnC: The body of the middle one needs some smoothing out, very rasta'd. The middle one's smile looks rather iffy, and the blue/green smudge effect should have been done more extensively.
    Also, the shadow doesn't mesh with the light source.
    You might want to have the text lower and smaller, ending right at the middle guy's collar.
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    If that outlining was done just a bit more, and maybe in a different tone, it would be really cool.
    Not sure about the effects at the bottom.


    If that outlining was done just a bit more, and maybe in a different tone, it would be really cool.
    Not sure about the effects at the bottom.

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    It seems so empty by the left and right, even with the text and those two other things placed there. Something put in the back should fix it. I WUV the the text.
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    blur the body. remove text.
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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    blur the body. remove text.
    This is one of the worst critiques I've eve read.

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    Like i said, this is my first piece in over a year almost. Lol honestly id have to say this is horrible lol. Definitely not my full potential at all xD

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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    blur the body. remove text.
    Why would i blur the body? That would remove the whole focal point....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Faux View Post
    Why would i blur the body? That would remove the whole focal point....
    He's a narb..obviously he has no idea whats going on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Faux View Post
    Like i said, this is my first piece in over a year almost. Lol honestly id have to say this is horrible lol. Definitely not my full potential at all xD
    Don't you have any of your old psd's?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. Vegas View Post


    Don't you have any of your old psd's?

    Well of course, i have all of them lol. What are you getting at? D:

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    I said blur the body cuz those strokes in the middle give me the creeps...
    And the text I was actually refering to the "lost in" cuz i think it doenst fit there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    I said blur the body cuz those strokes in the middle give me the creeps...
    And the text I was actually refering to the "lost in" cuz i think it doenst fit there.

    I may be a newbie here yet I have the right of havin my own opinion
    True. We also have the right to say your opinions are ass. Pretty neat huh?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post


    True. We also have the right to say your opinions are ass. Pretty neat huh?

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    Mean? i thought it was a progressive commentary.
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