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    Exclamation When there is one man left...

    Last edited by pabloco825; 05-01-2011 at 12:32 PM.

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    5 stars man!
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    Nice man! Good overall, some things to fix:
    -Contrast could improved greatly, too washed-out look, unless that's what you're going for.
    -Cover/blur out those things in the middle, they detract from the focal point.
    -Nix the white glow left of the guy's head, it looks like a different background (arctic sky or something).
    -smooth out the white brushstroke on the bottom, it sticks out bad.
    -put the text farther on the bottom, or higher up into a focal point.
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    Just remove all effect c4ds you may have used they stand out too much where they are
    You couldve blended the guy more and maybe move him a bit to the left
    As said the white brushing at the top is Just there for no reason

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    Get rid of the washed out feeling.

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    Good update, nice work on increasing contrast and fixing the white spot.
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    good that you fixed the problem with the random effects c4ds and the white brushing