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    Magna Carta

    v1

    SOTW entry for other website. Theme was "Vertical".

    I used a Magna Carta render, I have a couple of them, and they are just siickk.

    Inspired by the glow style of Dr. Vegas (and his bro's)


    Feel free to comment.

    v2
    Last edited by artemon; 05-12-2011 at 05:38 AM.


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    Get rid of the black and yellow bars. They make it look horrible.

    Other than that, its alright. 7/10.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Faux View Post
    Get rid of the black and yellow bars. They make it look horrible.
    Really? I thought it gives a nice touch, instead of a border.

    Anyone else think I should remove it?


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    Ruins the depth. Other than that I would say due to the characters of the render I would add some sort of dominant light source towards the top. Seems like theres no glow where there's the most light on the render.

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    yeah those bars need to go or if you want to keep them they need to be a different color the need to be thinner and the need to be placed better its pretty nice tho

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    Quote Originally Posted by Keroaplt View Post
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    yeah those bars need to go or if you want to keep them they need to be a different color the need to be thinner and the need to be placed better its pretty nice tho
    They definitely need to be thinner at the very least. But otherwise I think it's pretty gewd

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    Thanks for the CC guys

    v2 added.


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    V2 looks better, without the weird bars, and the lighting looks better too.
    8/10 .
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    Thanks. Submitted the v2.

    Let's hope this one will be a winner


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    V2 defnitily better. 9/10
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