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    the bw with teh red isnt a cool look tbh, if i was you i would move away from that style and work on ur general colours
    dont use that soft brush light source really makes the piece very amatuer
    try working more with a stock bg and learning about natural light
    and the pentooling is a little sharp
    text isnt the greatest, the normandy doesnt fit in and the placement should be closer to the render
    but still not half bad


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    Quote Originally Posted by Scrcrw View Post
    dont use that soft brush light source really makes the piece very amatuer
    try working more with a stock bg and learning about natural light
    Could you suggest some tutorial on that matter? I'm having problems with this aswell.

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    I quite like the idea of BW sigs with a touch of color
    As Scrcrw pointed out, not the best execution though.

    But it's a nice c4d you used there (mine are so old...).
    Suggest me an up-to-date detailed c4d pack?


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    Quote Originally Posted by artemon View Post
    Could you suggest some tutorial on that matter? I'm having problems with this aswell.

    On topic:
    I quite like the idea of BW sigs with a touch of color
    As Scrcrw pointed out, not the best execution though.

    But it's a nice c4d you used there (mine are so old...).
    Suggest me an up-to-date detailed c4d pack?
    I'll suggest the bioluminescence clyzm pack for you
    Or any mr robin or Angellus c4ds
    Whichever way you use them they tend to look good
    I like the pentooling you did it makes it more detailed than just the c4d there but as previously stated it is too sharp
    And yes the text is too far away from the main focal
    Too me it looks a little too tall
    Also on the left side i think the c4d rands out too much from the background

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    Looks okay. 9/10.

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    Its very well made, the blending is almost perfect, but from my point of view, the red strokes on his chest are a bit pixelated. 8/10
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    I like it but the first thing that I saw as a flaw was the lighting. You have a light source on the left side of the render (from our view) yet the lighting on the render is on the reverse side.