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    persia sig



    This is my first sig after reading a bunch of tut`s

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    Pretty good man, keep going thast way, u did an excellent piece of art.
    On the other hand, I think the txt isn the best (font and all that stuff) and U can easily see that his right arm doesnt blend with the wall (notice the white edge around the blade).

    overall 9/10
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    Is this really your first signature? It's actually pretty good. I'd give it a 8/10. And in future work don't put text in signatures because it's very criticised here in MPGH.
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    gamer4evere:
    ok thanks, i never noticed any of that

    Splinter Cell:
    Yes this is my first signature and thanks for the heads up about text.
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    Quote Originally Posted by odoacer View Post
    gamer4evere:
    ok thanks, i never noticed any of that

    Splinter Cell:
    Yes this is my first signature and thanks for the heads up about text.
    NP. Do as Spliter told ya, text isnt its strong point and u realise sigs are completly different without text. That is still cool so dont worry bout it.!
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    Quote Originally Posted by odoacer View Post


    This is my first sig after reading a bunch of tut`s
    render.....Background....Text.

    Sorry to say but to me it looks like the only appearance of effort on this was put into the text.

    4/10.

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    Very nice 9/10.
    I actually like the text a bit but next time try to test all the text you have (or download more) until you find a great combo. Also think about text before putting it on. Umm other than that, nice job

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    Just a heads up for you text fiends. Wacky and cartoon like font's are not always the best options. In most cases, simple fonts like times new roman and arial work amazing.

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    Looks too plain in my opinion.
    He doesn't stand out very well ?


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    Text is acceptable here it's just rarely done in a way that adds to the image rather than take away. In this case it takes away. For one it is a little hard to read either because the name or word is not a common word and the font is also a bit challenging. This causes the viewer upon seeing it to spend more time trying to decipher the text rather than appreciate the image.

    As for the actual image: The background is nice but the render and the background clash. The render has a very dark feel to it where as the background has quite the opposite effect. This is a simple atmospheric or lighting mistake. Honestly with a render like that I would have done something a bit darker because it has to do with like killing, fighting, etc. However to fix what you have where I would suggest experimenting with the burn and dodge tools AND/OR gradient maps and photofilters. Besides those things you can adjust the brightness levels as well as the contrast.


    It's a great job for your first piece and because of that I'm going to challenge you to do better your next time. Keep it up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    Text is acceptable here it's just rarely done in a way that adds to the image rather than take away. In this case it takes away. For one it is a little hard to read either because the name or word is not a common word and the font is also a bit challenging. This causes the viewer upon seeing it to spend more time trying to decipher the text rather than appreciate the image.

    As for the actual image: The background is nice but the render and the background clash. The render has a very dark feel to it where as the background has quite the opposite effect. This is a simple atmospheric or lighting mistake. Honestly with a render like that I would have done something a bit darker because it has to do with like killing, fighting, etc. However to fix what you have where I would suggest experimenting with the burn and dodge tools AND/OR gradient maps and photofilters. Besides those things you can adjust the brightness levels as well as the contrast.


    It's a great job for your first piece and because of that I'm going to challenge you to do better your next time. Keep it up.
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    Again? ugghhh. I has a paper to write tmr so maybe ill start it monday.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Faux View Post
    @Ryguy

    Me...You...Collab...NOW!

    You start bich.
    Another Collab, this should be good :P





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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    Again? ugghhh. I has a paper to write tmr so maybe ill start it monday.
    Lol no rush bro. Thats why i said you can start. Go at your own pace.

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    Send me a render.

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