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    ~Lost In Lines~



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    it's aight. but sometimes less is more. jussayin.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    it's aight. but sometimes less is more. jussayin.
    I will take that into consideration.


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    Love it, just dont like the black line.

    there is no light though, that sall you need to work on

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    Maybe a little less wireframe.
    Remove black borders
    Work on flow and bit more

    Nice attempt.

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    Also depth. I know you're gonna say that its hard to do with this but what I mean is that you just pasted the wire frame c4ds all over without covering the render too much. I would just erase parts around the render(or focal cuz i know this is a stock) just to give it more of a pop.