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    Drop Dead

    Just finished this beast ass smudge, CnC nigga.


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    I love you.

    xD

    Nice Flow and good job on the smudge

    8/10





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    Quote Originally Posted by Rinzler View Post
    I love you.

    xD

    Nice Flow and good job on the smudge

    8/10
    Thanks ya bro

    whats bad about it tho?

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    Some parts are not smudge good like at the top near the top right corner, you can see chunks of his shirt and etc.





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    The colors are kinda gross dude..and sorry but smudge isn't beast either.
    Focal and text are too smashed off to the LEFT and just seem completely out of place.
    Last edited by Ethereal; 05-25-2011 at 11:55 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post
    The colors are kinda gross dude..and sorry but smudge isn't beast either.
    Focal and text are too smashed off to the right and just seem completely out of place.
    Uhmm sorry but its not the right its the left. XD





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    Quote Originally Posted by Rinzler View Post
    Uhmm sorry but its not the right its the left. XD
    Yeah, that..

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    Looks alright to me....

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    Focal should definitely be more to the middle.

    Try to get the smudge more interesting, now it just looks like you dragged colors from bottom to top on a pretty high intesity.


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    Try using variations on the strength of your smudge brush. Try put in some more colours to add more variety as well. Don't be afraid to add in some nice lighting as well, like @artemon did in his signature.

    If you want I can link you to some nice smudging psds. They wont tell what type of brush the guy uses but it's something like a hard circle brush set to 85-95% strength.

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    this is not beast ass smudge
    ur colours are bland and not vibrant
    and ur focal is way too left


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Left is too sharp, right side is predominantly smudged and messy


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    Quote Originally Posted by Hardcore View Post
    Just finished this beast ass smudge, CnC nigga.

    1. There's no "wow".
    2. I don't like the sudden smudge border on the left side between the non-smudged and smudged part.
    3. Bad, BAD colours.
    4. It's clear that you did this in less than 5 minutes...
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    horrible smudges....
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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    horrible smudges....
    Read this thread. Take heed or get banned. Simple as that.


    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/148-showro...e-section.html

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