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    Deadspace

    My latest smudge, plz CnC.


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    Hurr hurr..

    I like the flow you had going around the render, but the background is just plain one-direction smudging. It looks abit like Motion Blur.

    The render fades with the rest too much, imo. Try having a smudge go "over" him and get some darkness (burn or black soft brush) behind the render so it stands out more.


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    I really dont like the effect of "Apply Image > Filter > Gaussian Blur then set it to Lighten"

    Its really overrated.

    But i guess some still like it.

    -Either way, the focal is somewhat lost in the smudging, try bringing it out more by removing some of the smudges near the right side of him.
    -Little could use a little more work.
    -Depth is lost.
    -Seems a bit plain

    6/10

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    tbh the whole blur on lighten thing is a kind of novice technique that really doesnt produce a good result in the end, it tends to detract from the sig
    as faux was saying your depth is lost, which is still import when doing smudge tags
    aswell i would go for the whole dark edges light circle technique for lighting, i would go for a more realistic concept


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    Neat not my taste but cool to see people's work.

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    -that background i like but you ruined it with the undistinguishable effects on the render they're so random
    -the lighting definitely needs work
    right now just do something simple like Filter > Render > Lighting effects

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    Quote Originally Posted by kristoff4me View Post
    Neat not my taste but cool to see people's work.
    @kristoff4me

    Learn to give real feedback then come back and post in this section. Shit like that, does not help anyone.

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    Good job it looks nice even though it doesn't have much effects on it. keep up the good work.

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    Brett yu rip tho?

    http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&se...ature#/d3dy7xr

    If link doesn't work just type in deadspace signature in deviant search and it will be one of the first tags that shows up.
    Last edited by Ethereal; 06-11-2011 at 09:44 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Sinister View Post
    and ?
    spam much?

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    Thats cute, bro.

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    Could've picked something better to rip

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post
    Brett yu rip tho?

    Browsing deviantART

    If link doesn't work just type in deadspace signature in deviant search and it will be one of the first tags that shows up.
    I don't see it...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Splinter Cell View Post

    I don't see it...
    search in "dead space smudge"
    Last edited by Parade; 06-11-2011 at 10:45 PM.

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