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    god of war.

    another stock edit , just getting in practice .

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    I see improvement in your practices but you should fix the lighting so you don't darken the sides so much. You should also show more of the area near his hand instead on focusing only on the render 'case its a stock. The text is also in a bad area where it takes the eye first instead of the render.

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    ase ape said the complete black on the edges has far too much negative space, try working with a bigger canvas so u can get more in aswell


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Quote Originally Posted by Scrcrw View Post
    try working with a bigger canvas so u can get more in aswell
    Go along with this advice, it will have a big impact on your resulting sig with the more amount of details in the picture.

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    fk that btch ass advice !

    lol , ok.



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    Quote Originally Posted by dariusgfx View Post
    fk that btch ass advice !

    lol , ok.
    Wheres the btch ass advice? I only see good advice

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    lol , im just playing .



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    Quote Originally Posted by dariusgfx View Post
    another stock edit , just getting in practice .

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    The lower edges are too dark and feel empty. Also, no text please!
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    The purple helmet is so... *sigh*
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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    The purple helmet is so... *sigh*
    thats a thug ass helmet ! dnt hate.