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    Assassins Creed Abstract









    Please pick the best, rate them and give me some CnC.



    P.S. Thanks will be issued to constructive criticism. I want to know what I can improve on.
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    I think you need to have a better render, because you can see an outline around it.
    I like the 4th the best because it's kind of like vectors making your eyes go to the focal.


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    The render looks like bad quality. You darkened it too much. I can also see the border lines between the background and the render. The signature it'self is boring. There are no effects. Nothing is happening. Bad and monotone background. I actually can't see anything good on any of those signatures, but the best one is probably the second.
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    Magic Wand ftl. Either render with pentool, increase the feather or give it a little glow.

    V4 is best. Nice lay-out, get some stuff going over the render too. Less contrast, more shading.


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    KK Will fix render. Higher feather.

    @artemon

    V4 With better render, I smudged it up some more aswell.
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    That's much better, but still...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post
    That's much better, but still...
    I was following a youtube tut I prefer it when I just play around till it works.



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    4th one is best out of them all, you seem to get the hang of it..

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    I like the last more moar D:

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