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    Too messy imo.

    Assuming those particles are on different layers, add soft drop shadow on some of them, to give the sig more depth. I also think it's too contrasted, the girl is almost plain white (unless that's the renders fault).

    The background looks kinda weird, that green comes out of nowhere. Either change the Hue to a more matching color (say purple), or incorporate more green objects near the focal.


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    looks greats .. but the text it's off .. u can make that more visible .. and V2 Copy it's more dark ... this signature like me


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    Make text come out more. And try not to scramble everything below the image...
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    Whats the difference between v1 and v2? Is it the lighting? And this seems like it got topazed but actually didn't.

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    in v2 he increased the lighting

    @artemon
    its a stock the green background is supposed to be there some of the lighting and other effects seemed to increase the contrast of the background.

    other than the text very nice 8/10 for me just work on text, blends to much



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    Quote Originally Posted by XxhellsshadowxX View Post
    in v2 he increased the lighting
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    LOL..
    v2 Decreased xD

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    my bad xD its my monitor stop hattin



    Roses are red, bacon is also red, poems are hard, bacon.

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    its okay..imo