I think its a good piece, Even if its black and white it still has some depth to it.
" Divided By None " - Showroom - MPGH - MultiPlayer Game Hacking | Awesome Screenshot
I marked a few things that I think could be corrected...
Other than that perhaps a bit more focus, and edginess to it, to give it that extra POW!.
Good job nonetheless..
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