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    Halo Beast



    Tell me what's bad and what's good please

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    I kinda don't like the text.

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    To me, the text looks out of place compared to the rest of the image.

    Nice signature, maybe put the text with a different effect and closer to the character.
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    Did you outer glow the text? :/ Never do that..

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    outerglow FTW
    there's this solid black behind the text yet the text just remains as bright i think it should be dark on the left side or moved closer to the render

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    What do you think of the no text version?

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    Quote Originally Posted by xXModz View Post
    What do you think of the no text version?
    It looks a lot better. I'd put some text on overlay somewhere in one of the 33% points.
    'ya know.. tippy: Do "New Guide" 33% and 66% horizontal and vertical.
    Good text placement locations, also good places for focuses.
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    Ithink thie blue thing next to his head should be MOVED to his body, its too saturated so a bit of color woulda be nice!
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    Quote Originally Posted by xXModz View Post
    What do you think of the no text version?
    It looks more worse. The entire thing looks more empty without the text. Text doesn't look out of place. KEEP THE TEXT.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Paramount View Post
    It looks more worse. The entire thing looks more empty without the text. Text doesn't look out of place. KEEP THE TEXT.
    Why, though? It's sitting there in a near-black background. I don't understand why it looks better with that text. He should put new, more elegant text in there.
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    Quote Originally Posted by omenSP View Post
    Why, though? It's sitting there in a near-black background. I don't understand why it looks better with that text. He should put new, more elegant text in there.
    I'm talking about the non-text version compared to the text version, not how the text looks. Look at that blank space on the left. It's a great place to cover up that blank space. But yea, the text needs a more "elegant" one there.

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    Reduce the glow a bit , try to make it darker ..

    nice tho .

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    Quote Originally Posted by xXModz View Post
    What do you think of the no text version?
    Upload a picture with the text WITHOUT the outer glow