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    3rd time's the charm



    Okay, I really tried hard to make the lighting work in this sig.. What do you guys think?
    Got inspired by another PSD I downloaded, but in the middle it totally took a different direction

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    Well the lighting is better but there's this big bright light on the left of your render yet the left side of her face is dark

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    I like it. The render is kind of boring, and I wish the shirt color was soething more dark, this way the signature looks to bright.
    Can you mention me here and tell me how you did those yellow lines?
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    @Splinter Cell
    Lrn2smudging

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    The background looks closely similar to a tutorial signature I've read once... can't seem to find it. Anyways, the smudge doesn't work well with the render. To me.
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    Definitely improved. Congratz!
    Now work in render blending ()
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    You kinda ruined the right side of the render with the soft brush :/ Turn it down a tiny bit.

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    Better than your last. Too much dead space though and lighting could still use a bit of work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Splinter Cell View Post
    ... I wish the shirt color was soething more dark ...
    Yeah, that would have been nice

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    Better than your last. Too much dead space though and lighting could still use a bit of work.
    Any tips for improving lighting in this tag?


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    render looks like its copyed on......................
    not saying it is im saying blend it abit more

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    @artemon

    well the only thing wrong with the lighting that i notice is the shadow on the left side. On her face.

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    Nice flow got there. Love how you smudged the effects.
    Nice blending. Just add some depth..

    Good Job, KIU