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    SOTW 9 entry. I quite like the result.

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    that shit just fucked me up

    i dont think i can enter sotw now XD

    nice work i really like it, not sure about the duplication of the render. also the light source behind him would look better if it was smoothed out

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    HIS ARM IS ANOTHER MARINE!!!

    Uh, the left side is a bit empty.


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    That orange light is a "T" or thy symbol of comunism xD
    No really, that light is the worst point of the sig. The resf is more than fine. 9/10
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    The sub-text is kThe signature is too bright. I don't like how you cloned the render then flipped it. Empty space on the left side and the background is boring.
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    Is the text a reference to FUBAR? Otherwise I don't really understand what it has to do with the sig.

    As for the rest: can't say anything bad about it, but it's nothing special either... Texture, render and light.

    The two renders would make more sence (to me), if they were like "covering each other". One runs at the front, one is behind him (a little bit smaller, but not by much) covering the side. Something like that.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Faux View Post


    SOTW 9 entry. I quite like the result.
    The duplicated midget render is a funny way to fill in space

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    Well, its kinda random when we talk about the focal..
    Anyways.. Lack of effects though. Nice lighting.
    I also like the text composition..
    Its kinda flat.. Add some depth KIU