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    Half Life



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    pro shit

    the effect around his waste is too bright and draws away from your focal imo

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    Wow looks good



     
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    Pretty slick. Good depth, light is nice, colours are great. Only niggle as storm pointed out


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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyle View Post
    Pretty slick. Good depth, light is nice, colours are great. Only niggle as storm pointed out
    Yea, I see. But if I turn it down, it's just too bland. Not much I can change now, so I'll keep it in mind for the next


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    I like this art..nice work man.

    Colors are really nice, basically I'm with what a few others said, that lower light source is a bit distracting.
    Anyway I think this is probably your best. Are you the same Pinky from Sig Resource a while back too?
    Forgot to ask that, I know I've seen you at some other forum..either there or HD.

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    Nice work man, i wish i was that good, lol.

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    I wish I was pro like you

    It looks good overall just with the colors and the contrast but really the lights that you did on the left side c4d looks too far apart from the main focal

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    I wish i was pro like you. But there are some things that other people stated you could fix such as colour and/or lighting

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    its pretty good
    but the big yellow thing is ruining it, it stands out too much and it confuses ur light sources, lighting is also a problem, but still a good tag


    Shifty sexy shit


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    I don't wish I was pro like you*
    Pretty good tag tho
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    AWE FUCKING SOME.
    The C4D are no nice.

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    @artemon can i have the c4d's ? also very nice work as every one has said the bright c4d thing just tone it down overall very nice peice

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    Gordan seems too small in this. I think you should crop the tag to get rid of everything above his head.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mAULed View Post
    @artemon can i have the c4d's ? also very nice work as every one has said the bright c4d thing just tone it down overall very nice peice
    You'll find some 'em them here:
    378 Pack - ALL C4Ds Added by ~stinky666 on deviantART

    There's one I used that @Ryguy used in his "DayDream"


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