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    Critic?

    i am working on the thing for SOTW #10 theme is greek mythology and i don't know if i have to submit first or no but i'd like you all to critique this for me:



    i know its not amazing but this took 5 minutes so ...
    i DO want to win though so please critique this.
    rate and if not 10/10 then tell me why ( use detail )
    please do not repeat unless adding to the help.

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    Pretty good 8/10

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    1. What's that eagle have to do with Greek Mythology?
    2. Text is hard to read, go with a combination of 2 fonts, maybe some gradient/stroke/etc..
    3. Colors are ok, but it needs more effects. Try Bubbles of Effect C4D. Fractals might work too. A "net" wireframe might do the trick aswell.
    4. Adjust the lighting on the bird by burn/dodge or simply by brushing over it.


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    The text is too small and unreadable, the eagle has nothing to do with the SOTW theme and the background is too monotone and nothing interesting. Also, I can see the outlines of the eagle, try blending it in...
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    @Splinter Cell
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    the eagle IS greek mythology, if u go kinda deep into it Zeus had a pet eagle ...
    i can't remember the name but thank you guys for the tip ... as soon as i get my laptop back from my mom i will fix those last minute ... maybe even get a new BG for it that fits better, i'll display at least 4 different versions before i enter.

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