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    i no that i have dont some bad in the gfx section recently, but i hope in time i can gain your trust back.

    My newest tag, plz CnC.


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    This what I been waiting for...
    Okay, so first when I saw the tag I was like "WOW".
    Then I went to check the right side of the tag and BOOM, my eyes started hurting. That is like a lot, A LOT of pen tool there.
    But I like the colours match and effects.
    The right lower corner seems kinda plain black with 2 pen tool lines...
    I've seen your work, and you CAN do better...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chuck Bartowski View Post
    This what I been waiting for...
    Okay, so first when I saw the tag I was like "WOW".
    Then I went to check the right side of the tag and BOOM, my eyes started hurting. That is like a lot, A LOT of pen tool there.
    But I like the colours match and effects.
    The right lower corner seems kinda plain black with 2 pen tool lines...
    I've seen your work, and you CAN do better...
    Yes took long indeed, i wanted it to be perfect becuase this is my "apology tag"

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    This is not bad. What I would say to this is to even out your work. You have extensive pen tooling on the right side which is fine but theres hardly any on the other side. Sometimes it works to do it they way you did it but I believe if you had added more to the left side or removed some from the right side it would be better. Other than that there's not much immediately displeasing with this so good job.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    This is not bad. What I would say to this is to even out your work. You have extensive pen tooling on the right side which is fine but theres hardly any on the other side. Sometimes it works to do it they way you did it but I believe if you had added more to the left side or removed some from the right side it would be better. Other than that there's not much immediately displeasing with this so good job.
    Thak you for the feed back ryguy.

    im glad to see that someone on the gfx team appreciates it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    This is not bad. What I would say to this is to even out your work. You have extensive pen tooling on the right side which is fine but theres hardly any on the other side. Sometimes it works to do it they way you did it but I believe if you had added more to the left side or removed some from the right side it would be better. Other than that there's not much immediately displeasing with this so good job.
    That too. You have much more pen tool on the right, and it's too visible because there's a black background on the right. The left also has a lot of pen, but it's ignorable since it blends with the background colours... It's good overall, but you could work on the details...
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