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    I made this tag, like it?

    plz CnC.



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    Very nice but the focal is a little unclear and not blended well. I guess you could say because of the color scheme you got it's a little messy.I would also work on lighting and depth, my eyes are kinda all over the place.

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    Need to work on bring your focal out more. But nice effects and colours are quite good

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    Thanks for the CnC guys.

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    Really good job, i love this sort of art, its either super simple or C4D covered, and yo blended it well on the let side but it was abit all over the place.
    i didnt know where to look as RyGuy put it so well. maybe smudge or blurr the c4d's on the left side.
    but i dont know how to blend so Meh.

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    Like the guys before said, bring up the focal more, and I don't like that red C4D on the right, kinda draws too much attention. It has very good flow and nice colours.
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